Evaluation
Research Skills
When I was writing the article, I have been doing research on the advantages and disadvantages of file sharing and popular YouTube music artists. I have used a variety of websites such as Esquire, Metro, and post discussing piracy on Reddit. I could have used more statistics in my work.
Writing Skills
My article uses a formal attitude to discuss the increased use of the internet and how it is changing the music industry. I could have discussed more on the other ways of entering the music industry. I could have also used a larger font as it is hard to read.
InDesign Skills
I have learned a lot from my first experience in using this program. At first I had a basic Idea of what the tools were and how to structure my article. I also learned how to import text by using copy and paste and how to insert images. I am also able to export the article into JPEG or PDF format so that I can post it onto this blog.
Web Publishing Skills
I already had a blog on Blogger before taking AS Media so I already had an understanding of how the website works. I also have experience in using html so I could format the post in however I want. I found writing the blog posts of the progress of the article easy.
Conclusion and Targets for improvement
In conclusion, I found the planning of the article hard but found the writing and the blogposts easy to do. If I had comments on my blog then writing the evaluation of the article easier to do. In order to improve my article, I should have added more statistics and more information on Youtube Converters and proxies.
Although you have covered each of the areas in the Evaluation, this is all very brief and rather cursory. YOu don't give illustrative examples and you haven't developed your ideas sufficiently. Some media specific language is used. Where are your comments from your target audience? This evaluation is disappointing. Vanessa
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