The structure of your DPS is clear and concise. It is easy for the eye as it is not too complicated for the reader. However the font is a bit dark with the dark background which can be a bit hard for the reader to read. The photo is professional and suits the contents page well. Overall a good start to your DPS.
The structure of your DPS is clear and concise. It is easy for the eye as it is not too complicated for the reader. However the font is a bit dark with the dark background which can be a bit hard for the reader to read. The photo is professional and suits the contents page well. Overall a good start to your DPS.
ReplyDeleteAn updated version of the dps can be found here:http://christiansorianoasmedia.blogspot.co.uk/2014/12/note-second-dps-page-not-constructed-at.html
DeleteI have also taken your comments into consideration and have used a lighter shade of grey for the DPS
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